Entry #2


The worst walk

So, it is about a story that happened to me some days ago, I’ve a dog, her name is Molly, she is a german shepherd, she is 4 months, but that age is enough to be a complete disaster. Since the very beginning, nobody in my family agreed to have that kind of dog, for the bunch of problems that they cause. My father made me buy her food, her leash, and all the supplements that Molly would need, he let me keep her as long as I look after her.
So, it was a Sunday afternoon that I took Molly for her first walk in town, she was full of beans and extremely happy. Something that worried me that day was that someone had told me that the first time you took a german shepherd out you had to be very careful since they are very playful with people, and that often the way they play can be aggressive, but since I was in love of Molly I did not think this was like that.
While we were walking, Molly had her gaze on everything, on everybody,  but suddenly Molly got crazy and I didn’t know what was going on, until I noticed that a little girl was walking in front of us with her cutie cat, and that's where the madness began, Molly ran like crazy in order to “play” with the cat, the little girl was crying and screaming, people around didn’t know what to do, until somebody approached Molly as fast as he could, it was my brother, so I got my brother to help me with that horrible mess. Thanks God, Molly did not hurt the kitten, but definitely it was the worst walk I ever had.

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