Entry #2
The worst walk
So,
it is about a story that happened to me some days ago, I’ve a dog, her name is
Molly, she is a german shepherd, she is 4 months, but that age is enough to be a complete disaster. Since
the very beginning, nobody
in my family agreed to have that kind of dog, for the bunch of problems that they cause. My father
made me buy her food,
her leash, and all the
supplements that Molly would need, he let me keep her as long as I look after her.
So,
it was a Sunday afternoon that I took Molly for her first walk in town, she was
full of beans and extremely happy. Something that worried me that day was that someone had told me that
the first time you took a german shepherd out you had to be very careful since
they are very playful with people, and that often the way they play can be
aggressive, but since I was in love of Molly I did not think this was like that.
While
we were walking, Molly had her gaze on everything, on everybody, but suddenly Molly got crazy and I didn’t know
what was going on, until I noticed that a little girl was walking in front of
us with her cutie cat, and that's where the madness began, Molly ran like crazy
in order to “play” with the cat, the little girl was crying and screaming,
people around didn’t know what to do, until somebody approached Molly as fast as he could, it
was my brother, so I got my brother to help me
with that horrible mess. Thanks God, Molly did not hurt the kitten, but definitely
it was the worst walk I ever had.
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